Discussion Assignment
I would be willing to donate to The American Red Cross. This is because The American Red Cross is a humanitarian organization that offers emergency assistance, disaster relief, and educate people on preparing for disasters. I like the American Red Cross because its services reduce human suffering during emergencies. This organization is more comprehensive and serve almost everything about humanitarianism. This organization’s core values are similar to m6y hearty values of compassion, credibility, collaboration, commitment, and creativity. The organization does numerous activities that would otherwise have overstretched the medical sector of the country. It is for this reason I choose to donate to the American Red cross.
Response to other writings.
Armine: I find this piece of writing fascinating. She expresses her feelings and why she chose to donate to that organization. The structure of her sentences is well-formed.
Katya: Katya’s introduction is good. She introduces her writing, stating the organization and the reasons for choosing altogether. She further expounds the inner drive of why she should choose the Clare Boothe Luce Policy Institute and not a different organization. She also concludes her writing well, but I think it would have been better to use shorter sentences.
Eileen: Eileen, in her writing, expresses herself pretty well. However, I think; first, she did not choose one non-profit organization. Also, she does not give reasons why she chose those organizations. She has instead explained her experience while interacting with the organization. Eileen is too general, which does not appeal to me as much. Although the sentence structure and the phrases are good, I feel like she went out of the topic.
Donara: I find this to be a bit clumsy. The writing does not give the expected result. She talks of orphanages without a specific orphanage facility in mind. I think writing should address the given instructions and show some relevance to the topic. Although she shows compassion for children and seems to really care, she would choose one children’s home to donate.